I'm going to review it. I saw mention of it in some of your previous work on Medium. I decided to skip it because this atheist feared the title would interfere with the effort to open the eyes of Christian and Muslim believers.

NB: You definitely should fix the typo in the opening sentence. The phrase "televisions shows..." should read "television shows...". A typo so close to the work's opening can prejudice readers against it.

James Hollomon
James Hollomon

Written by James Hollomon

Majored in Chemistry, designed electronics automation until the industry moved offshore, transitioned to writing & web development. Currently writing Cult.

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